All the revision in the world will not save a bad first draft: for the architecture of the thing comes, or fails to come, in the first conception, and revision only affects the detail and ornament, alas!
世界上所有的修改都不能挽救一份糟糕的初稿，因为事物的结构在最初的构思中就已经形成，或者还没有形成，修改只会影响细节和装饰，唉!
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